Hi Erick! I liked watching your elevator pitch! I think you did a fantastic job keeping me engaged throughout the entire pitch. I liked that you added some numbers and statistics into the presentation; it's a great way to get someone's attention, and it puts things into perspective. I like how you got a little creative and added some editing to your delivery. It's not something that I didn't even think of doing. Overall great job explaining your opportunity and how your product fixes it!
Hey Erick, fantastic elevator pitch! The pitch was very concise yet engaging, and you spoke very clearly throughout the presentation. Your inclusion of statistics and facts about the industry further strengthened your point and I like the inclusion of those few subtitles to emphasize your most valuable points. Your pitch gave me some ideas that I can possibly add to my next one. Your pitch also perfectly summarized your last assignment and brought the most crucial details up and you explained them very well.
Hey Erick, I enjoyed learning more about your idea through your elevator pitch. I thought it was very informative and persuasive. The statistics and facts you used put your idea into perspective for potential buyers. After watching your pitch I will use your strategies to get my idea across in a more business professional way. Great job I hope you continue to build upon your idea!
Hi Erick, How much will the hand-picked service repair associate get paid per hour to help the customers? Is this fee separate or part of the profits generated from the small fee of each transaction? How will you handle peak call periods? Will there be a time limit before additional fees will be charged? Will the associate need insurance in case they are sued for bad advice? Will the associate be from the customers general area or from somewhere in the country or world that is cheapest?
Hi Erick! I found your elevator pitch to be very good! Your introduction leading up to pitching the appliance fixer app was great and I thought the pitch itself was really good as well! The only thing I would have liked to know while watching the pitch would be what you would call the app? Overall, great pitch and great delivery!
Hi Erick!
ReplyDeleteI liked watching your elevator pitch! I think you did a fantastic job keeping me engaged throughout the entire pitch. I liked that you added some numbers and statistics into the presentation; it's a great way to get someone's attention, and it puts things into perspective. I like how you got a little creative and added some editing to your delivery. It's not something that I didn't even think of doing. Overall great job explaining your opportunity and how your product fixes it!
Hey Erick, fantastic elevator pitch! The pitch was very concise yet engaging, and you spoke very clearly throughout the presentation. Your inclusion of statistics and facts about the industry further strengthened your point and I like the inclusion of those few subtitles to emphasize your most valuable points. Your pitch gave me some ideas that I can possibly add to my next one. Your pitch also perfectly summarized your last assignment and brought the most crucial details up and you explained them very well.
ReplyDeleteHey Erick,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed learning more about your idea through your elevator pitch. I thought it was very informative and persuasive. The statistics and facts you used put your idea into perspective for potential buyers. After watching your pitch I will use your strategies to get my idea across in a more business professional way. Great job I hope you continue to build upon your idea!
Hi Erick,
ReplyDeleteHow much will the hand-picked service repair associate get paid per hour to help the customers? Is this fee separate or part of the profits generated from the small fee of each transaction? How will you handle peak call periods? Will there be a time limit before additional fees will be charged? Will the associate need insurance in case they are sued for bad advice? Will the associate be from the customers general area or from somewhere in the country or world that is cheapest?
Hi Erick!
ReplyDeleteI found your elevator pitch to be very good! Your introduction leading up to pitching the appliance fixer app was great and I thought the pitch itself was really good as well! The only thing I would have liked to know while watching the pitch would be what you would call the app? Overall, great pitch and great delivery!