Here is the link to my second Elevator Pitch:
Reflection: The feedback I received was very positive, something that was super nice to see. Everyone liked the statistics I added to make the point more convincing, as well as, the story that I presented to really set the scene. I put a lot of effort into making sure it sounded persuasive, informative, and concise. Now as far as the edits I made to this one, I emphasized another great feature the app would offer (competitive market pricing), a suggestion I received from one of my peers. I also tried to speak more clearly and at a slower pace, but because I had added a section to my speech, the time constraint was definitely a challenge. Additionally, one of my peers stated that she was curious as to what I would name the app, so I decided to implement that into the speech. This allowed for viewers to put a name to the idea, making it more memorable.
Hi Erick,
ReplyDeleteI really liked your introduction because it hooked the audience and grabbed my attention. You added nice hand gestures to grow the momentum as well. Another thing that I appreciated was your variation in pitch, so when you talked it wasn't monotone or stagnant. Great job!
Hi Erick,
ReplyDeleteYou have a great elevator pitch! You can really tell that you practiced your pitch beforehand. Throughout the pitch, you sounded confident and extremely knowledgeable. I liked how you added how you would make money from the app; I think that information is valuable to know. You did a great job explaining the app and the problem it solved. Overall, your delivery and editing were excellent and made the pitch easy to watch.